大排李 发表于 2008-9-7 00:29   全显示 1楼
文如其人,看来楼主是直爽之人。上来就开门见山，三言两语交待了父女发生“性爱”关系的缘由，不给人突然、莫名之感，无形增加了文章的真实性。接下来描写与爱女的ML，叙述流畅而又贴近生活，足见楼主观察生活，把握文字功底，虽然直白但读者看地畅快。随后，与爱女的ML在司空见惯的意外中戛然而止，把人胃口吊起，好奇心大增，期待将来的发展进程，看来楼主的“且听下回分解”的意图很强哟！期待早日拜读大作。
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