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[征文冠军] 【2019文心雕龙——幻欲旖旎】【香陵十三钗】【41】【完】【征文冠军】

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好的小说就要有血有肉,人物心理要刻画的细腻,纠结,反复,在写肉戏时,前期一点要羞涩,羞耻,后面才能通过打破这种羞耻,让女人因为身体的诚实而变得淫荡,前后形成对比,让读者有一种强烈的感官冲击,但是女人身体可以淫荡,但意志却不能淫荡,要高贵典雅,坚强,这样玩女人才会有爽点。
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