wxh0930 发表于 2021-6-13 15:53   全显示 1楼
个人觉得，这篇根本不用刻意去侧面描写玫姨与其他几位女老师的谈话，毕竟毕竟我们基本上都会猜的出猪脚会把这几个老师收服了。感觉应该多写写猪脚与这几个老师的日常互动，然后猪脚对老师有了亲近感，再通过玫姨介绍顺理成章把事办了，这样写感觉老师是凭空出现然后做完又消失的路人甲乙丙。个人见解还望大佬不要在意
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